
“The Rose Garden is being redesigned,” said she,
walking amidst brambles on the zig-zag path
I saw potential which could have bloomed
if not partnered with obnoxiousness
-an identity that could have shaped better
without the golden umbrella
which encased her hungry spirit

Very nice even with the zig-zag path of obnoxiousness. 🙂
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Thank you, Bill 🙂
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You’re very welcome.
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ahh. this is beautifully done.
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Thank you so much!
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Brilliantly written and beautiful!
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Thank you, Lucy!
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“The golden umbrella that encased her hungry spirit”. Brilliant! Such wisdom couched in a garden walk.
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Thank you, Beverly!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Linda!
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Nice write
Much✏love
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Thank you, Gillena!
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