Surprises

I spent a lifetime 
waiting for a surprise
to spring from somewhere

It is blue
not the sunny yellow
I drew
for my dreams to follow

I spent a dream
waiting for sunrise
the night ended there

19 thoughts on “Surprises”

1. This is lovely, Reena 🙂

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   1. Thank you so much!

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2. It’s beautifully written !

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   1. Thank you so much!

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3. Beautifully written!

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   1. Thank you, Shweta!

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      1. My pleasure 😊

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4. Beautiful piece, Reena!

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   1. Thanks so much!

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      1. My pleasure!

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7. I sense a lovely depth in this

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   1. Thanks for the sensitivity 😊

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8. dream
   the life

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9. It’s blue, not the sunny yellow I drew!!
   Lovely poem Reena.
   Thanks a lot for joining in the challenge.

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   1. Thank you!

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10. Lovely Reena.

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    1. Thank you so much!

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