gulfs widen
I see sharp words fly
egos stretch
in search of
relevance, and mar
yet unwritten story plots
It’s Six Sentence Story Thursday Link Up!
gulfs widen
I see sharp words fly
egos stretch
in search of
relevance, and mar
yet unwritten story plots
It’s Six Sentence Story Thursday Link Up!
When I first read this, I pictured one scenario, but when I read it again, I picked up on something entirely different. Excellent!
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It happens. Someone else can have a third viewpoint 🙂
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You’ve managed to capture a shared, contemporaneous experience in what, a mere 19 words?! Amazing Six, Reena.
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Thank you so much, Denise! It does not conform to your fiction prompt, yet…..
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Hey, I see 6 lines there 😀
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🙂
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This says so much!
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Thank you, Lisa!
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What a relationship could have been except for those unthoughtful words. Nice poem Reena.
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Thank you, Len!
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I love this, Reena. You’ve picked up on the energies of this isolation! Well done. ❤
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Thank you, Colleen!
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Welcome. ❤
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Wow wow wow–5-Star!
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Thanks unlimited 😀
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My pleasure 🙂
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very real. nice job
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Thank you so much, UP!
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span
woman
to uomo
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“Egos stretch in search of relevance” – Lovely
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Thank you, Roshni!
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there is surely more need to protect one’s spirit in these times for forced ‘togetherness’.
Thoughtful Six
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Thank you, Clark!
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