“I’m not sure how are you going to live together.”
“Baby, we are on our honeymoon…”
“I’m not sure if I want to continue with the marriage. So many differences have surfaced already.”
“We just had a fun-filled day capped by a candle-light dinner …”
“But what about the night?”
“Wait for the magic to happen …”
Dev’s eyes reflected the twinkling stars as he looked at the sky. It had stopped raining, and the clouds were drifting away.
“Come back to your senses. I told you to book the cottage, not a tent…”
Dev felt the romance drifting away.
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Hope it works out for them.
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Thanks ☺
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Spontaneity seems to be an issue for poor Dev’s partner. But boy, what a surprise, to be surrounded by canvas or nylon rather than sturdy and soundproof walls on your honeymoon! And there might be bears! I can see why she’s a bit perturbed. 😊
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Wouldn’t anyone be? 🙂 Thank you so much!
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Best laid plans usually have warts – especially when you are on a Honeymoon! Bad timing I guess. Darn it all!
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Thank you, Nan!
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Lets hope that old saying holds true for them. ‘Rough start means a smooth finish’.
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Yes. Letz hope for their happiness 🙂
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Ouuu, methinks he’s already in the proverbial doghouse… My hubby forgot to secure transportation home from our wedding. I was NOT amused! Should have been an indicator… Yep, should have heeded that one. Too late now, 24 yrs later he’s still forgetting things.
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I can relate to this 🙂
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Oh my, not a good beginning. Hopefully, they can learn to understand each other better. Good job, Reena!
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Thank you, Brenda!
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Oh dear, not a good start! Nice one Reena.
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Thank you, Keith!
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They are two different people and look for different things from life.
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Opposites attract to start with, but then ….
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A night under half a canvas eh?! Maybe its not for her. Good stuff well told
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Thank you 🙂
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Now that is a funny, funny slice of life Reena…..and so true.
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Disasters are always memorable – like the first burnt toast or overdone cake.
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LOL! Well done! Yep, he should’a checked with her what will put HER in the mood … 😉
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Thank you 🙂
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We honeymooned in the northern Michigan woods. In a delightful little cabin.
And an outhouse.
And no bathtub or shower.
And snakes who sunbathed on the rocks behind the cabin.
And that was 50 years ago 🙂
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Glad it took you back in time 😀 Precious memories!
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Yes, but I could have done without the snakes.
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I suffer from ophidiophobia too. And I need a washroom as minimum infrastructure ☺
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Ophidiophobia. What a delicious word for such a horrid creature, fear thereof 🙂 And yes, I would be quite unhappy if I had to use an outhouse all the time.
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Reena Saxena good one again. Dev is surely in trouble
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Certainly, thanks!
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you are always warmly welcome
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Oh dear, I think Dev’s in trouble!
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Certainly! Thanks 😀
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If there’s one sure fire way to ruin a honeymoon night, this would be it!
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Thanks 😀😀
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So many expectations.
Poor Dev.
Hope everything becomes okay.
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I’ve heard of divorce suits being filed immediately after honeymoons 🙂
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