“I have been commuting by this train every day, for the last six years now.”
“Is there a special purpose?”
“Do you see the bridge on the right? Somebody jumped off the cliff six years ago. I suspect it was not a suicide.”
“Ohh! What clues do you hope to find now?”
“I’m sure her soul is wandering around here. She has not found the means to reach me.”
So saying, he waved out a flag with the words, “Stella, I wait for you”.
OMG! Stella is the girl I pushed off from here. She was pregnant with my child.
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Oh wow…didn’t see that coming!
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Thank you, Dawn 🙂
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Murder!
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😊😊
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Nice twist Lovely.
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Thanks, Jo!
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Excellent twist. I want to know more!
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Thanks! She came back for revenge 🙂
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Chilling. 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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He’ll be haunted forever more.
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He deserves it 😀
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Oh no. A murder mystery
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No mystery when the killer confesses 🙂 Thanks!
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Oh okay. Thank you Reena
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Your final few words took me by surprise! Nice one Reena.
Click to read my FriFic tale!
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Thanks, Keith!
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The callousness of the young man is quite chilling.
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True of many criminals. Thanks!
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Great twist Reena.
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Thanks!
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Great ending. Took me by surprise. Bad guy, hope the ghost hunter figures him out 🙂
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That would be another story 😀. Thanks!
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Well, that is truly the past catching up with him. Good story, Reena.
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It does… but it is too late for the victim.
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Great twist!
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Thanks, Lisa!
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What a sinister twist!
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Yes 😊
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The use of a trivial casual phrase like OMG makes me think this father-narrator is young and immature, as well as insensitive and murderous.
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Random expressions convey so much. A lot to learn here about characterization. Thanks!
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Well that took a murderous twist!! Good story, Reena 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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