exquisite emotions
wrapped in wordiness
unwanted diversions
tangential absence….
what does it take
to fully have me –
pregnant silence
torturous expectation….
the unspoken does not exist for you
the spoken loses potency for me
verbosity is your expression
being dumbfounded – my misfortune

I think this one of your best, more communicated in the silences and frustrations of listening than in the multiplication of words. So great, and painful to not be on the same wavelength with the loved one.
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Thank you, Lona! Glad you liked it.
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There are some people who never learn to communicate…
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Unfortunately so.
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no meeting of the minds in the inner/outer dialogues, you’ve captured it beautifully
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome.
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Interesting interplay with words and beliefs, liked it!
…rob from Image & Verse
Lost in Azure
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Thank you, Rob!
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Nice description: “the unspoken does not exist for you
the spoken loses potency for me”
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Thank you, Frank!
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This was a great piece of writing
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Thank you so much!
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Compelling piece and the last verse is excellent, especially the last line. Thank you for joining in.
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Thanks!
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Interesting word play.
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Thanks 😊
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The last line is hits.
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Thanks 🙂
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