tropical summers
midpoints shift with goalposts
clouds need release
sky supports for own relief
raindrops cool parched, summer skins
Midsummer Rain
tropical summers
midpoints shift with goalposts
clouds need release
sky supports for own relief
raindrops cool parched, summer skins
midsummer relief
cool bodies on cut grasses
let the rain deploy
©J/h
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Brilliant!
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Midpoints shift with goalposts – great line in a quenching poem.
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Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haikai Happenings #1 (6/25/18): Reena Saxena’s latest #tanka for my current #haikai challenge!
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