3 thoughts on “Pain”

  1. What a punch you’ve packed into seven lines. You have done a great job with the clarity pyramid. What did you think of the structure? I quite liked it (haven’t used it before).
    I especially love your final line. Definitely drives home the point.

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    1. Thanks, Sarah, for bringing in new formats. I thought of adding a reverse pyramid to elaborate, in case seven lines do not bring out the gist. Or juxtapose it with another theme?

      Am I allowed to post another entry? 🙂

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