I wonder
why do epiphanies
not occur sooner than end of dreams
why does fate test the fortitude of sufferers
till they retreat from war or hit back
staying firm, resolute
in times
of moral turpitude
carving difficult paths in slime
standing straight with feet planted in whirlpools of fate
(Hidden thought)
They retreat from war or hit back
carving difficult paths, with feet planted in whirlpools of fate
Triquain Swirl for Weekend Writing Prompt #49 – Random(3)
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That notion of whirlpools of fate is the source of great discussion Reena….it suggests a far greater belief in the randomness of life.
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Experience often corroborates that. “Man proposes, God disposes’ has perhaps originated from there. The Bhagvad Gita explains it in the form of Karma theory.
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Wow! Great triquain – you did so well with the crown and I love the phrase “whirlpools of fate”.
Have you used this form before?
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No. Thanks for helping me learn a new form 🙂
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