Barely Spring

life emerges

from deep hibernation,

looks like spring offshoots

of my buried, frozen dreams?

I still mourn the ones I lost

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Victoria C. Slotto says:

February 26, 2018 at 2:38 am

You capture the beauty of winter introversion on the edge of emerging.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  February 26, 2018 at 4:20 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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Frank J. Tassone says:

February 25, 2018 at 2:36 pm

Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #5: Reena Saxena’s latest #tanka for my current #haikai challenge!

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Frank J. Tassone says:

February 25, 2018 at 2:36 pm

Beautiful, Reena! Thanks for sharing it! 🙂

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  February 25, 2018 at 5:14 pm
  
  Thank you, Frank!
  
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  1. Frank J. Tassone says:
    
    February 25, 2018 at 6:15 pm
    
    😇
    
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