I stand in a whirlpool
awestruck, moonstruck
feet encircled by storms
virgin sand beneath wriggles away
the deflowered shore
washed by receding tides
flaunts scattered, ragtag remains
of a fleeting romance
wild waves, uncontrolled
disintegrate midway
reflect weeping stars
aftermath of wanderlust
https://sammiscribbles.wordpress.com/2017/11/18/weekend-writing-prompt-29-random/
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Beautiful poem full of vivid imagery. đ
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Thank you, Sammi!
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Very visual.
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Beautiful, and excellent imagery, Reena.
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Thanks, Franci!
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The delightful undercurrent of energy and memories is beautifully captured
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Thank you, Peter Wells!
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Excellent poem Reena, love how you have combined the beach, the water and the suggestion of a past romance….
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Thank you so much!
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