“All stunts are performed by trained professionals. Do not try them at home”. But I could try them outside, after being trained. I have to prove the naysayers wrong.
The world watches with awe, the determination of a jilted lover. My well-built muscles show intense training. I lost my beau to an athlete. I don’t understand how an athletic body matters more than a loving heart. I did what I did not believe in doing, and then ……. dumped him.
I watch out for
critical behaviors
that belie masks
disguise as well you can
the core will speak for itself
Haibun inspired by Bikurgurl at
Pic: Nicolas Picard

Oh how lovely! Jilted lover returns the jilt – a new perspective for you 🙂 I’m not familiar with a Haibun, but I love the rhythm of this piece. Thank you so much for always joining us in our writing community — we’re so much stronger with you in it ❤
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i enjoy it thoroughly. Thanks!
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