Illusion

firefighting

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I realized

the smoke was in my eyes

all veils were an illusion.

Tanka inspired by

Image : Ellendill at deviantart.com

8 thoughts on “Illusion”

micketalbot says:

June 20, 2017 at 8:53 am

great depth
but reach out
life’s no illusion

off the top…
my head… now bald..
waaaah…

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  June 20, 2017 at 10:03 am
  
  🙂
  
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Colleen Chesebro says:

June 14, 2017 at 7:52 pm

I love this Tanka. “The veil of illusion…” another great line and description. You’re on a roll!!! ❤

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  June 15, 2017 at 4:00 am
  
  Thanks! And I like your new profile pic.
  
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  1. Colleen Chesebro says:
    
    June 15, 2017 at 1:16 pm
    
    LOL! I’m sticking with my fairy theme! Thanks for the compliment. 🌹🍀🌹
    
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Olga says:

June 14, 2017 at 3:53 pm

Interesting poetry and visual. Much depth to those words. ❤

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  June 15, 2017 at 3:55 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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