Making sense

Making sense ….by Punam

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I sit still in the pockets of stillness

holding delicately the errant heart

suspended between
the harsh and loud crashing waves of accusations

mulling over the razor-sharp words

and the wounds left on my wrists

inverted query marks that question your maps

of which way the relationship should head

cynical assertions mock simplistic way of looking at life

my views are like a lost alphabet alone and adrift

in the vast seas of sardonic know-allism

now when I look back at that naive, gullible person

I wonder was that really me?

My crumbling thoughts are doctored to sync with others’

the debris of such thinking falls in undulating patterns

it is a miracle that still some sense can be made

of the free-flowing bonds that keep us tied to each other

our silence often embellished with pregnant pauses

But where others see potential of emptiness

I see an ocean of…

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SHUTTERED

Iain Kelly's avatarIAIN KELLY

In the end, governments didn’t need to ban religion. The numbers attending had dwindled away to almost nothing.

It was their arrival that had sparked the crisis of faith. They had laughed at the world and their primitive beliefs. They had shown them the universe beyond the tiny galaxy their Earth inhabited.

No God created this, they told their newly conquered servants, through mirthful laughter. We did.

Humanity acquiesced.

In a small synagogue, hiding in the darkness of the shuttered doors and windows, she stood to address her small band.

‘Today,’ she told them, ‘we start to fight back.’


rivington-st-shul-roger-b Copyright Roger Bultot

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.


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Beyond Cloud Nine #poetry

judeitakali's avatarTales Told Different

Photo prompt: what do you see?

What happens when we surpass our goals
and transcend the euphoria of touching the sky
when we take that leap of faith
onto the fabled cloud ten
obscured and outshined by the lesser nine

but always there, sacred or profane
a step from greatness to legend
no more sky, no more blue

.

But to reach so far is to be alone
when stars and moon are all you see
gentle lights, minute on a backdrop of envy
You dare not look below, for the plummet down cannot be survived,
To fall is to end.
so you look above, held by charges of lightning from your ascent
And like the tree you are, you grow some more
to find a foothold on the moon in reach

Alas, even that moon is not safe from envy
a crescent of light is all you…

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Was That Really Me?

“Was that really me?”… by VJ Knutson

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Was that really me,
signed his life away
fresh-faced, innocent
marched North
then sailed East
to unknown seas?

Fuelled by anticipation,
anchored by camaraderie,
that boy who crawled
through jungle deep
weathered Burma heat
and nightmarish infestations,
adrenaline pumping
infiltrated enemy lines
unarmed, feckless
nursed fears with booze
adopted false bravado.

Was that really me,
that man who emerged
hard-edged, battle-weary,
whose medals of bravery,
buried now, speak more
of loss, and horror
than triumph –

And who is this,
whose rage intimidates
with trigger-sharp precision,
who ravages all that is dear
ideals slaughtered,
hopes destroyed,
whose enemy
now dwells within?

(Today is Remembrance Day.  Spurred by the prompts of Reena’s Exploration Challenge – “Was that really me?”  and Ragtag Community’s “bravery“, I have tried to put myself in my father’s shoes.  He fought for the British Commandos during WWII, and in hindsight, suffered PTSD.)

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Jim’s response to 10 phrases

On Reena's Exploration Challenge this week, Jim took the trouble to write two pieces, weaving in the prompt words. The result is not just creative, but informative as well. Here are the links to the two articles - https://jimadamsauthordotcom.wordpress.com/2019/11/08/reenas-phrases/ https://jimadamsauthordotcom.wordpress.com/2019/11/09/reenas-phrases-part-two/ Go ahead and enjoy ... Don't forget to tag Jim in the comments 🙂 Prompt … Continue reading Jim’s response to 10 phrases

Preventative Wisdom

‘Preventative wisdom’ — by Deborah

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In Response To:

Reena’s Exploration Challenge #112 – This week you can choose one or more from a set of 10 words/phrases, to kick start your thought process. Let us see where the journey takes you. The comments often offer different perspectives and start another thread of creativity. Find time to read those and interact with other writers.

Here are the options….

  1. pockets of stillness
  2. question your maps
  3. cynical assertions
  4. lost alphabet
  5. was that really me?
  6. crumbling thoughts
  7. undulating patterns
  8. free-flowing bonds
  9. pregnant pause
  10. potential of emptiness

Sue Vincent Thursday Photo Prompt:  Glow #writephoto – Use the image below as inspiration to create a post on your own blog… poetry, prose, humour… light or dark, whatever you choose.

Amongst the glow

of a pre-risen Sun

pockets of stillness

can be found for a

soul to rest and be

nourished in contentment

to eschew and intercept the

potential of emptiness.

~ *…

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Reena’s Exploration Challenge #112 -A mashup of prompts

Sadje’s take….

Sadje's avatarKeep it alive

Reenais the host of Reena’s Exploration Challenge.

Welcome to another week of inspiration and options!

WRITINGPROMPT 112

This week you can choose one or more from a set of 10 words/phrases, to kickstart your thought process.

pockets of stillness

question your maps

cynical assertions

lost alphabet

was that really me?

crumbling thoughts

undulating patterns

free-flowing bonds

pregnant pause

potential of emptiness

~*~

Making cynical assertions never helps to resolve a conflict

There are pockets of stillness, perhaps a pregnant pause

Keep your crumbling thoughts together, find the lost alphabet

Fight the potential of emptiness and the free-flowing bonds

Before you question your maps study the undulating patterns

The answers are always there, right in front of our faces we just

Need to overcome the impulse to score a hit, curb the desire for

Oneupmanship, whichmight give us a temporary high but leaves

Us wondering was…

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Reena’s Exploration Challenge #112- Pause/ ठहराव

English translation in Comments section…

Indira's avatarSharing Thoughts

Reena’s Exploration Challenge #112

WRITING PROMPT 112

This week you can choose one or more from a set of 10 words/phrases, to kick start your thought process. Let us see where the journey takes you. The comments often offer different perspectives and start another thread of creativity. Find time to read those and interact with other writers.

Here are the options….

  1. pockets of stillness
  2. question your maps
  3. cynical assertions
  4. lost alphabet
  5. was that really me?
  6. crumbling thoughts
  7. undulating patterns
  8. free-flowing bonds
  9. pregnant pause
  10. potential of emptiness

Pockets of Stillness

जिंदगी दौड़ रही
बेरोक बेलगाम सी 
कभी कभी इसमें 
विश्राम होना चाहिए
जिंदगी कटी यहाँ 
वहां घूम घूम के
अब तो कोई 
पड़ाव होना चाहिए
बदला ना खुद को कभी 
अपनी ही जिद में जिए
अब तो व्यवहार में 
बदलाव  होना चाहिए  
बचपन में खेले खूब  
जवानी में भटक लिए
बुढ़ापे में थोड़ा  
ठहराव होना चाहिए
~Indira

It is so much more rewarding…

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