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Heartbreak’s Ordeal

let me go crazy as hell
no one could come and tell
i spit fire then i could yell
damn, i’ll burn you down i swear.

i played along with my spell
heartbreak made me wild as hell
like Maleficent’s ordeal
damn, i’ll crush you hard beware.

i, being in charge of hell
victory is mine i could smell
i will welcome you to hell
damn, i’ll hurt you that’s for sure.

For Val’s NPM

Looking at Nonce Forms for NPM

Prompt 2.

Melinda’s Whimsyby saintvi – a poem of 3 quatrains (4 line stanzas) where the rhyme is A/a/a/b, a/A/a/b, a/a/A/b where A indicated the same end word. The meter is iambic trimeter for L1-L3 with L4 having 7 syllables. BONUS: Include a whimsical creature.

For Reena’s Exploration Challenge

Being in charge of hell…

Reena’s Xploration Challenge #274

a peaceful lake
unknown magical ripple
calms blue skies above

power in my hands
being the incharge of hell
Goddess of the skulls

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Pic credit: Barsha Rani

Written in response to:

being-in-charge-of-hell-die-holle-leiten-reenas-xploration-274 by Reena

new2writing.wordpress.com/2023/04/03/tile-tales-sisters by KL caley

Thank you for reading!

Stay blessed always! 💞

frozen in time, the leaves dry out,
layer upon layer , they rot,
gossamer memory webs out,
frozen in time, the leaves dry out,
domes of despair, they dance about,
charge of devilish hell that’s fraught,
frozen in time, the leaves dry out,
layer upon layer , they rot.

Poetry form ( Triolet :- “A triolet is an eight-line poem. All the lines are in iambic tetrameter (for a total of eight syllables per line), and the first, fourth, and seventh lines are identical, as are the second and final lines. This means that the poem begins and ends with the same couplet. There is a tight rhyme scheme — ABaAabAB.)

Disclaimer :- I don’t know if I got iambic tetrameter correct though, any online tools to help me learn, would be helpful .

Notes :- If we hold on to unpleasant…

From Reena it’s a theme prompt this week.

Being in charge of hell….

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It was her first day at her job

She felt that this was unbearable

Discipline was just a dream

Floating in the subconsciousness

Her voice was a mere croak

As she had talked non-stop since morning

When thirty kids were all complaining

Fighting and bickering among themselves

Their yelling was deafening, ear-piercing

She never imagined being a kindergarten teacher

Was like being in charge of a mini hell

Hell couldn’t be worse than this classroom

Maybe it will get better with time?

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Written in response to; RXC- Prompt #274, hosted by Reena

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Satan found solace in a place where he could be the supreme ruler, so he said that it is better to reign in Hell than serve in Heaven.  If you believe in God, then you have to believe in the devil, as that is the way Christianity, Islam and Judaism religions teach us.  Let’s just assume that my good friend Fandango is wrong and that there is a God, then we can wonder what it would be like being in charge of hell.  I guess that there would be a lot of fun people down in hell and that most of the boring ones would be up in heaven, but then there would also be a lot of pedophiles there too and I don’t want to be around them.  If a really bad person like a serial killer repents and lets Jesus into their heart, they will be forgiven and…