I have used a 2,5,6 – 2,5,6 pattern. Let us call it Ascent, in the absence of a better term.
Silence
is not agreement
least of all compliance
I speak
to be heard, if not
understood by aliens
let us
leave an impression
free to fade or erase
I have used a 2,5,6 – 2,5,6 pattern. Let us call it Ascent, in the absence of a better term.
Silence
is not agreement
least of all compliance
I speak
to be heard, if not
understood by aliens
let us
leave an impression
free to fade or erase
let us indeed’leave an impression’ Reena 🩷
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That is the least we can do.
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Nicely done Reena. A good message in here too.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Silence can be noisy. Brilliant piece. Brava!
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Thank you so much, Eugi!
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You’re welcome, Reena!
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Ascent feels entirely appropriate for this poem’s words too 👏
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Thank you! I attributed it to the shape.
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At times it seems aliens may be the only ones to understand. Sometimes silence is a solution or an answer. We all have a choice whether to hear the message, or not.❤️❤️
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Thank you, Melissa!
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