Where are the worlds I was destined to lead?
unmanned spaceships hijacked in orbit—
rendered still by civilizations unseen,
those who choose silence to remain free.
Basements are mute, the sky above scorns
forgotten futures abandoned by life.
How old would that aborted child have been—
a foetus dissolved, yet aching to be?
Where are the artists who birthed the impossible?
Heckled for daring, not echoing norms.
They gave me fire, they gave me dreams
-those who sold vision, but found no eyes to see.
Was it a tsunami or quake that ripped designs
It was a force that swallowed a capsule of time
I survived to search, with a dream to redeem
-the junk dealer closed shop before I reached.

Cycles and waves… each generation has its plus and minus of good and not so good. One persons junk is another persons treasure.
May we still yet find some treasure in our lifetime.
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Amen! You are right in saying so.
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A powerful first line to draw the reader in. Almost a poem by itself!
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Thanks for seeing it that way!
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Youthful ambitions, the unrequited search for legacy, the disappointment with self, the times we find ourselves in – what is not said directly in your poem is evoked, Reena – a great write…
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Thank you so much for the fulsome praise, Frewin!
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So much has been changing so the only things we know is that our destiny is shrinking by the day,
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I like how you put it – destiny shrinking by the day. Thanks, Bjorn!
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You have chosen a haunting image to match your haunting and evocative poem, Reena.
Each line leaves a lasting impression.
Now, what is UBI Sunt?
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Ubi Sunt is the MTB prompt at dVerse. It means “Where are they?” It is picked up from a longer Latin line, and the words “Where are they” had to be included in the poem.
Thanks for the effusive compliments!
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Thanks for taking time out to explain, Reena. So kind of you.
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❤️❤️
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Evocative and haunting! The new reality? Brava!
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Thanks a ton, Eugi!
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You’re welcome, Reena!
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this is such a deeply philosophical poem but I like your own inclusions especially “Where are the worlds I was destined to lead?”
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Thank you, Laura!
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The way the world seems to be structured. Everything lost in the end, eventually.But then, where does it go?
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Wish I had an answer 😦
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wonderful poem Reena, very evocative!
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Thank you, Carol!
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A thoughtful, and inspiring poem.
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Thanks, Diana!
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😀
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This is a hauntingly beautiful and deeply evocative poem. 🌌
Your words carry a rare blend of cosmic imagery, existential questioning, and raw emotional depth. The opening stanza immediately sets the tone, contrasting vast unmanned spaceships with the silence of unseen civilizations—an image that feels both futuristic and timeless.
I was especially struck by the second stanza—“How old would that aborted child have been— / a foetus dissolved, yet aching to be?”—such a powerful line, merging the fragility of human life with the weight of unrealized potential. It lingers in the mind long after reading.
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Thank you for the detailed comment, Vermaji!
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Oh a very profound poem Reena.
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Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome
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