splash of joy
stained reputation
-growing up
awakens
the mind to consequences
childhood bliss cut short
somewhere on the bench
my perspectives on life changed
those exciting sprints
became tiring marathons
a setting sun grieves the day
splash of joy
stained reputation
-growing up
awakens
the mind to consequences
childhood bliss cut short
somewhere on the bench
my perspectives on life changed
those exciting sprints
became tiring marathons
a setting sun grieves the day
Great poems, Reena, though the tinge of sadness lingers.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks 😂
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Deep takes on both the prompts, Reena.
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Appreciated.
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I really loved your second poem Reena! Very nice good job, well done on both poems! 😁🌹❤❤
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Thanks, Carol!
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One perfect and thoughtful stanza for each picture, and wonderfully linked, beautiful work, Reena.
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Thank you, Mason!
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Excellent!
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Thank you so much!
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A very deep, thought provoking poem Reena. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Beautifully wistful and sullen
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Thanks a ton, Jude!
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Profound thoughts, worth pondering, Reena. How perspectives change with the passage of time!
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Thank you so much, Balroop!
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Reena, this is a potent piece, layered and nuanced, capturing a universal emotion 💕
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Ange, I’m grateful for the engagement and encouragement that comes from you.
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You are so welcome Reena 💕
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