Frozen rocks grip beach bones
unbending under daylight’s plea.
their silence aches,
a frozen howl of grief.
Across a ridge
thorn-thicket veins split open
from pain, soft shoots emerge.
green tendrils twist toward change,
unafraid.
sunlight limps in
with scorched grace, whispering:
I burn because I must.
Must that force your shape
to outlast its flame?
To survive is not to yield,
but to recast your armour
to shield with choice,
not erase the wound.


Excellent take, Reena, especially the last four lines.
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure.
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All these stanzas are amazing, but this line – “a frozen howl of grief” – is sublime. Lovely, Reena!
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Thank you so much, Susi!
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You’re welcome!
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Amazing poems, Reena!
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Thanks for the constant encouragement, Yvette!
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Oh, so much depth, Reena! Superb writing.
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Thanks a ton, Eugi! Much appreciated.
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You’re welcome, Reena.
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Beautifully written Reena ❤️
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Thank you, AJ!
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Wow! Amazing and profound poetry Reena. Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks so much! ❤️❤️
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You’re welcome
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Ooh… fabulous, Reena!
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So glad you liked it 🤗
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“to shield with choice,
not erase the wound.”
I just love this. Beautiful poem, Reena.
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Thank you so much, Maria!
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