My thoughts wander on undulating sand
I feel one with clouds, winds and raging storms
I go with high tides, then choose to subside
Uncentered in whirlpools, I find my calm
I feel one with clouds, winds and raging storms
Watch tales unfold as waves hit the shore
Uncentered in whirlpools, I find my calm
I am the reader and the story, when I spin yarns
Watch tales unfold as waves hit the shore
My thoughts wander on undulating sand
I am the reader and the story, when I spin yarns
I go with high tides, then choose to subside
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The pantoun is a perfect form for such a meditative walk in the sand
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Yes. The refrain digs it in. Thank you, Bjorn!
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excellent prose
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Thank you!
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Reena, seamless and wise. Beautiful pantoum. It’s been awhile since I wrote one also.
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Thanks, Lisa! Start writing 🙂
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You’re welcome. I will 🙂
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Such a beautiful poem.
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I wrote a pantoum after a long time and enjoyed writing it 🙂 Thanks!
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It’s a beautiful poem.
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