peace beckons
screen lines almost flat
the deathbed
infant smiles
in her mother’s arms
hope abounds
travel, child
cross lines of control
breathe easy
baby squeals
with delight; invites
attention
grandma smiles
a hand raised to bless
falls lifeless
peace beckons
screen lines almost flat
the deathbed
infant smiles
in her mother’s arms
hope abounds
travel, child
cross lines of control
breathe easy
baby squeals
with delight; invites
attention
grandma smiles
a hand raised to bless
falls lifeless
Reena, this was like reading a story! Excellent capture of emotions. When I got to the last senryu, I felt the emotions in your words. I think this is an excellent series.
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Thank you so much, Colleen!
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You’re welcome, Reena.
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Lovely lines
Thanks
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Thank you, Selma!
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Beautifully written, Reena!
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Thank you so much!
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I love this Reena …one in one out 💜💜💜
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Thank you, Willow!
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I love the way you have different sides of life.
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Thank you!
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You’re most welcome.
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Thank you, Reena, for this lovely contribution 💚
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Thanks, Robbie! Glad you liked it.
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Nicely done
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Thank you so much, Sadje!
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You’re very welcome
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