ALMOST
dreams fulfilled
celebrations
in the air
explosions
round the corner, firecrackers
and then – a close brush
someone says
art imitates life
life denies…
The above poem is a broken Shadorma for W3 Prompt #151
Image credit: Photography by Hanan Mamoun
INTERPRETATION
hope springs
in the form of
bright blooms to capture hearts
cherry blossoms last weeks
the tree lives on
sums life
Creative Experiments and More 
hi, Reena 😁
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted for the very first time by our delightful Anupama, is now live:
Enjoy❣️
Much love,
David
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Thanks!
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*hug*
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Reena, I liked your broken shadorma (new to me) but I loved it! You captured life moments perfectly. I also liked your Badger’s hexastich. Another great capture of spring.
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Thank you so much, Colleen!
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The sparse, fragmented style really worked very well. It feels like a fleeting moment captured in just a few lines—so fitting for the prompt.
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Thank you so much!
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beautiful. So true to life. Adored it. Thanks.
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Thanks so much, Selma!
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Reena, this broken Shadorma captures life’s fleeting moments beautifully!
~David
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Thank you so much, David!
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💜💜
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Absolutely great 💜💜
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Thanks, Willow!
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Bravo! This is such a delight!! A two-fer!!
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Glad you liked it, Val!
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Beautiful- both of the poems.
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Thanks again!
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My pleasure
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Brilliant. You make these poetic forms look easy, Reena. Great take on both prompts.
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Thanks so much!
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