hope
drives life
up somewhere
in the stratosphere
restless minds aim at perfection
reality hangs like a pale gauze on blazing suns
find
me in
cloudy skies
if you are God, wrap
me in godliness till I shine
bright above believing masses of humanity
Believers
Creative Experiments and More 
These lines in particular are ingenious, Reena ❤
~David
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Glad you liked those, David! Thank you so much!
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So much to love about this! I especially liked how the shape of the verses reflected the shape of the double tower 🙂
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Yes, sometimes the format lends to a shape. Thank you so much, Linda!
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This is beatifully written and structured,
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Thank you so much for the appreciation!
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well done. thanks for sharing.
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Thank you!
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A wonderful poem Reena ❤ well done! 😀
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Thanks so much!
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Beautifully expressed.
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Thank you so much!
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Beautifully written Reena
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Grateful as always….
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Brilliant take, Reena.
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Thanks!
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“a pale gauze on blazing suns” is a stellar line. How insightful. Thanks.
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Thank you so much, Selma!
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You’re so welcome. 😉
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Lovely.
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Thanks, Dawn!
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Beautiful poem, brilliant inspiration.
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Amazing lines penned
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Thanks 🙏
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Wow! What a mind-stirring and compelling piece, Reena. I agree with Melissa, “reality hangs like a pale gauze on blazing suns” is a stunning line.
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Thank you so much, Eugi! It means a lot coming from you.
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You are most welcome, Reena!❤️
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“reality hangs like a pale gauze on blazing suns”
An amazing line.
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Thank you so much, Melissa! Ever grateful!
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