thresholds lay down the law
movement happens
by defiance
Urns full of love
spill – to make the world
a place worth living
bookends protect
minds learn and propagate
-knowledge spreads
Personal brands-
new age nomenclature
for fluid identity
a shapeshifter that adapts
yet emerges better
from each assumed shape
ideas need to travel
at the risk of
transformation
hollowness lives forever
it has nothing to lose
face it, ignore it
judgmental remarks
come from blocked spaces
severely restricted thoughts
success is not being afraid
of consequences
of freedom
of mirrors
and critics

Quite powerful this one. Well done, Reena.
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Thank you, Maria!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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“hollowness lives forever
it has nothing to lose
face it, ignore it”
Yep, life is too short to endure the nothingness of hypocritical and deceitful people. Archiac mindsets come from blocked spaces, and the unwillingness to have an open mind about the future.
Brava!
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Love the fluidity and cadence of this piece of what I think reflects self-determination. Brava, Reena!
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Thank you so much, Susi!
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You’re welcome, Reena!
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Oh yes, very well written Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re very welcome ☺️
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I love the final verse!
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Thanks a ton!
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excellent!
judgmental remarks
come from blocked spaces
severely restricted thoughts
So true!!!
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Thanks for resonating with it!
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🙂 especially your own inner critic.
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Bang on!
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