Optimism – Mantras to beat the shadows

Posted on by Reena Saxena

I am sure, shadows retreating slowly, stealthily
I am sure, shadows retreating slowly
I am sure, shadows retreating
I am sure, shadows
I am sure
I am
I ….

I
I am
I am sure
I am sure, Shadows
I am sure, shadows retreating
I am sure, shadows retreating slowly
I am sure, shadows retreating slowly, stealthily

stealthily, slowly retreating shadows, sure am I
slowly retreating shadows, sure am I
retreating shadows, sure am I
shadows, sure am I
sure am I
am I
-I?

I
Am I
Sure am I
Shadows, sure am I
Retreating shadows, sure am I
Slowly retreating shadows, sure am I
Stealthily, slowly, retreating shadows, sure am I

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14 thoughts on “Optimism – Mantras to beat the shadows”

  3. I love what you did with both the repetition and the order of words, and to the form of the lines themselves, alluding to me to an hourglass, giving the mantra a visual element to manifest as well.
    Thank you so much for sharing, wish you a Happy New Year!

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