It was a vacation from life.
I watched friends and foes drown in uncertainty, rise up to the surface, find tools to reach the bottom of the ocean, while I flew around soundlessly.
I don’t know why the flight felt like a suspension, like I was a kite – not a bird with wind under my wings. They thumped and thawed, I fell with a thud, and there were celebrations all around.
Friends or foes?
They say I was in a coma, and they revived my heartbeats.
My soul is slipping into a coma, but there are no doctors around.
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These feels so sad.
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Leaving the body for a short while or forever may seem sad, but can be the greatest adventure ever
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Interesting little twist to a surreal story!
Lovely writing, Reena!
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Thank you so much!
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Well told. I can see your story in my mind. 🙂
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So glad to know that. Thank you, Bill!
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A very surreal experience. You describe it well.
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Thank you so much!
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An accident or a terrible dream? Well done.
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Thank you, Athling! It could be OBE or anything else.
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I’m still not sure if this was a dream engendered by real-life conflict, or the result of some terrrible accident–or both!
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It could be an out of body experience.
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Poignant description of internal conflict. Very well done.
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Thank you so much!
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