candles of protest
flicker, melt down
evil clouds
overpower light
Sun’s seventh horse
lean and mean, agile
takes the reins from guile
cuts across the sky
-a bolt of thunder
redefines day and night
-revolution of sorts
in the sky
moves to parched earth

A blazing fire has been sparked within me upon digesting this enormous flaming ball of energy which is your poem. My sacred flame will burn a little while longer. Thank you.
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Why does this feel like a Chatgpt comment?
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I’m unsure, as that’s just my writing style. I don’t use chat gpt, I must just think to similarily like chat gpt. 🙂
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Trying to descern reality between bot and human is starting to become an increasingly tedious task, soon I feel it will be impossible to know if you’re speaking to a human or not on the other end of the massively intertwining tubicles that make up the Internet
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One thing we can rely on though is that good old human error element, for the most part chat gpt responses will be grammatically and spelling perfected. So if they don’t slip up ever, then they’re a bot and if they do slip up they’re most likely humanoid.
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Thanks!
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Maybe bots imitate your style 🙂
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🙂
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The title reminded me of that.
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Yes.
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Wow! Excellent. Now you reminded me of the forgotten movie.
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Yes. I just came across the book “Sooraj ka saatvan ghoda”. Reading Hindi after ages.
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I have ordered ‘ Andha Yug. No Hindi books library here. Books are costly affair.
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Andha Yug is cheap. I guess the author died long ago, and they may be disposing off old copies.
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WOW! Excellent, Reena!!
❤
David
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Thank you so much, David!
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A very deep message there Reena – well done. 👏🏼
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Thank you, Ami!
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You are most welcome Reena! 😊
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Energy… pure electric energy here! Love the horse imagery.
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Thanks a ton, Susan!
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I enjoyed your ‘candles of protest’, Reena. I also love:
‘Sun’s seventh horse
lean and mean, agile
takes the reins from guile’.
Great rhyming!
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Thanks a ton, Kim!
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