I can feel the oppressive heat from your words, Reena. You also get high humidity as well, don’t you? Stay in the air conditioning. Thanks for sharing the view outside your window. 💛
Your poem perfectly captures the feeling of impending summer heat. The contrast between the “blazing sun” and “evaporating/wet rivers” is striking and effectively conveys the idea of the changing season. The line “sultry climes scare residents” is particularly powerful, as it emphasizes the discomfort and potential danger of extreme heat. Overall, your poem is beautifully crafted and evokes a sense of both anticipation and apprehension for the coming summer. Well done! 👍👏👌😊
I can completely relate to heat and humidity, Reena, though I’m sure it’s much worse where you are. Great poem!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette!
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I can feel the moist heat💜
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Yes. Mumbai and suburbs suffer from humidity.
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It must be wearing 💜
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It’s safe inside the house.
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I am glad to hear that 💜
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Oh my, now I am wondering where you are located! Already thinking ahead to heat and humidity!
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Mumbai, India 😀
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Oh, I can see why it would be hot and humid. And such a huge city! Makes our US cities seem “small” by comparison!
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India is a huge country with 1.3 billion population 😀
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So huge. Are there a lot of huge cities or mainly Mumbai and Delhi?
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I can feel the oppressive heat from your words, Reena. You also get high humidity as well, don’t you? Stay in the air conditioning. Thanks for sharing the view outside your window. 💛
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Thank you, Colleen! Since I work from home, it is possible to stay protected.
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That’s great news. I love working from home, too. Same for me.
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Your poem perfectly captures the feeling of impending summer heat. The contrast between the “blazing sun” and “evaporating/wet rivers” is striking and effectively conveys the idea of the changing season. The line “sultry climes scare residents” is particularly powerful, as it emphasizes the discomfort and potential danger of extreme heat. Overall, your poem is beautifully crafted and evokes a sense of both anticipation and apprehension for the coming summer. Well done! 👍👏👌😊
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Thank you! I see the river drying up though it’s only March. Mumbai summer starts in Feb.
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Hoping you have good air conditioning. Temperature extremes either way can be oppressive.
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Yes. We can’t survive without air-conditioning here.
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Nicely done
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome
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