Balance, Harmony
overhyped words
what really matters
an equalizer
-Temperature
freezes or thaws
facilitates, obstructs
ice enhances taste
fiery opens new vistas
what’s tolerable
how far can you go
combinations are treaties
signed by incorporating
right mix and balance
Temperature lies at the core

It feels like temperature is substituted for intention.
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I read it again by substituting the word ‘intention’ for temperature, and yes, it makes a lot more sense.
Sometimes I edit poems which were written to suit a specific prompt. I guess it should be done a lot more.
Thanks a ton, Susi!
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You’re welcome!
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Words that are nicely used to form a meaning out of it. Would love to know, what’s the secret to form such a good rhyme of words.
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Thank you! This is free verse, so there is no particular format or rhyme pattern.
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Would u Mind reading few of my stories, and give me suggestions!
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Followed you.
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Thanks a lot!
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Insightful. I enjoyed the analogies you made here. “Temperature” is a good tool in so many situations.
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Thank you, Mish!
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Ice is often a necessary ingredient in the mix
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Yes. I wonder what you consume in sub-zero temperatures.
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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It’s was great reading
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Thanks!
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Nicely done
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Thank you, Sarah!
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Very well expressed and thought, Reena! ❤
~David
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Thank you, David!
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Reblogged this on https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Enjoyed this a lot 🙂
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Thank you, Paula!
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