The prompt line I chose
Not trying to brag or anything, but I can wake up without an alarm clock now simply due to my crippling and overwhelming anxiety, so…
My take
subconscious thoughts conquer with unseen tentacles
I’m on a leash, can’t break away from dark shackles
I change the technique, I change my spectacles
darkness turns golden, sunshine envelops nights
I’m on a leash, can’t break away from dark shackles
I paint the same picture in shades of gold and white
darkness turns golden, sunshine envelops nights
pain transforms into needed lessons learnt right
I paint the same pictures in shades of gold and white
subconscious thoughts conquer with unseen tentacles
pain transforms into needed lessons learnt right
I change the technique, I change my spectacles
Creative Experiments and More 
The Pantoum form works really well – like a fine weaving of verse. Bravo!
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Thanks, Moonie!
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tense and dense
sugar and salt
stomach pain
and urge again
back to sleep
ha!
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Your words are deep…and uplifting.
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Your constant engagement and encouragement is appreciated so much.
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The ending made me smile. Changing perspective gives new insights 💕
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We don’t always have the power to change the world around us. This is the only way out.
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I love how you’ve turned it into a message of strength and hope.
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome
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Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Very powerful words! Great read
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Thank you, Darren!
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