rolling stones gather no moss smoothness facilitates motion adaptability to different terrains nominates them for victory static rocks acquire character -are worshiped for history they support -till they forget worlds beyond their compressed energy suffocates - unaware that release is possible they can live again…
Rocks

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The first line really hooked me in. Some great metaphors that I’m sure could conjure up a few different ideas. For me, it sent me to politics…..figures that give us hope “till they forget worlds beyond “
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There are graveyards of thought everywhere, including politics.
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That last stanza….so interesting..
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Thank you, Ain!
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Reena, this poem is thought-provoking in many ways. ❤
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Thank you, Colleen!
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You’re welcome.
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smoothed away
some waters
skirt around
to day perhaps
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So very true! 💕🙂
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Thanks, Harmony!
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Very interesting Reena.
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Thank you!
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You used a very great metaphor. xx Michael
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Thank you, Michael!
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