I peel apples now to avoid eating wax I learnt with time how to deconstruct what people say and get to the core of what they mean polished exteriors notwithstanding A flicker of the mouth eyes wandering away to imagined lands to write another story tell me what’s fiction -and where’s the truth I peel apples now to avoid eating wax
Poetics: How to Cut a Pomegranate


Simple and so profound. I love this!
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Thanks so much!
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‘I learnt with time
how to deconstruct
what people say
and get to the core
of what they mean’
– it’s a useful lesson. Anyone can show a ‘polished exterior,’ but it doesn’t mean the core is not rotten!
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Thank you, Ingrid!
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Couldn’t believe the timing … I am eating an unpeeled apple right this very minute! A lovely write …..
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As long as it is unwaxed, fine ☺️ Thank you, Helen!
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Great poem, Reena. I especially enjoyed the 2nd stanza 🙂
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Thank you, Sunra!
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Too much wax and too many masks… you have to peel the layers to get to the core.
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Agree. Thank you, Bjorn!
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green to red
ripe rife ideas enter my head
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I love the circularity of your extended apple metaphor, Reena, which appears straightforward but has hidden depths for the reader to unpeel. I especially love the lines:
‘I learnt with time
how to deconstruct
what people say
and get to the core
of what they mean’.
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Thanks so much, Kim!
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love the transition from apples to your mind. a profound write.
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Thank you so much!
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Deep one, Ma’am. Loved the layering. 🙂
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Thank you, Aishwarya!
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