fast moving colors, change everything within
Who’s trying to hide, disguised in rain?
cloud bursts dropping secrets
but no one dares to catch
Who’s trying to hide, disguised in rain?
allegations slipping off the skin
but no one dares to catch
guilt accumulates within, dodging
allegations slipping off the skin fast-moving colors, change everything within guilt accumulates within, dodging cloudbursts dropping secrets
15 April 2021
Creative Experiments and More 
Extremely well done. I really like this one.
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Thank you, Linda!
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You skillfully repeated the phrases and I like how they fell together in the last stanza.
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Thank you! Repetition is a part of the Pantoum format.
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Yet it was you who chose to use pantoum? You are welcome!
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Lovely, evocative poem, Reena.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you so much, Rochelle!
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What a beautiful, thoughtful poem.
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Thank you so much!
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Superb piece and excellent take on the prompt!
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Thank you so much, Franci!
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My pleasure, Reena.
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A beautiful poem and beautiful use of the prompt. Well done.
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Thank you so much!
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Fantastic take on the prompt.
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Thanks a lot!
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You’re welcome 😉
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skin deep
why we weep
how are you
do i care
hell no i do not
care
how you are
how do you think so far
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