Progression

love rules
hearts, then minds
-let go

6 thoughts on “Progression”

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Colleen M. Chesebro says:

April 1, 2021 at 1:16 pm

Reena, this is an excellent senryu. I love lines one and two together… but when I take lines two and three together, it’s even more meaningful. Excellent. ❤

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  April 1, 2021 at 10:01 pm
  
  Thanks a lot!
  
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  1. Colleen M. Chesebro says:
    
    April 2, 2021 at 6:01 am
    
    ❤️❤️❤️
    
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Patricia says:

March 31, 2021 at 1:56 pm

That is true, and there is often a battle between the heart and mind. And sometimes neither wants to let go.😼

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  March 31, 2021 at 10:44 pm
  
  We need to access the soul at that point. Nothing can be done beyond that 🙂
  
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