you charge
ahead with force
not knowing what drives you
darkness within, in search of light
Meaning
escapes, but continues to haunt
deep valleys and high roads
till you look, dive
inside
you charge
ahead with force
not knowing what drives you
darkness within, in search of light
Meaning
escapes, but continues to haunt
deep valleys and high roads
till you look, dive
inside
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Very insightful Reena. I enjoyed reading the passion and thoughtful advice on display in your cinquain poems, as we get to know ourselves a little better in the process too.
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Thank you so much! If you’ve started, you will finish 🙂
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Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger for all Genres as well as craft books and commented:
Oh, really like this! Makes you think!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome, Reena!
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Excellent Butterly Cinquain. You always hit the spot in the relationship department with your poetry. Well done. ❤
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Thank you so much, Colleen!
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Sadje above really said it all – to find peace, look within!
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I agree. Thanks!
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Deep and resonant
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Thank you, Jude!
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My pleasure
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Lovely!
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Thanks!
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Wonderful poetry! Love the imagery of valleys.
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Thank you, Suzette!
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Very true, Ma’am. 🙂
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Thank you, Aishwarya!
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🙂
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The true meaning lies inside.
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Agree
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