breathing in, breathing out, just moving on thoughts expanding -from rivulets to sea can't remember what I stumbled upon meeting all, parting with some on the way listening to all, but my heartbeats' sound I worshipped the ocean, remained a bay all the songs I sung came just from a word maybe a syllable, or a deep breath then it found a blue sky, flew like a bird I persisted, found a figure of speech but married to music, it did not rest consciousness touched expanded to a beach Was it only words, or the voice that sung the spirit before it escaped my lips? neither my humble heart knows, nor the tongue I accept limitations, and withdraw universe is larger than what I thought immortality comes from what you saw
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You have to accept the vastness of universe i think
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That’s right. Thanks, Bjorn!
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Good observation: “universe is larger than what I thought”
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Thank you, Frank!
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I like the self acceptance.
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Thank you, Beverly!
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your poem is an intriguing and ethereal rendition – I like the lightness of touch you gave it and the full use of the rhyme sets. Love this:
“Was it only words, or the voice that sung
the spirit before it escaped my lips?”
and thank you for joining in with this prompt
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Thank you for hosting an interesting prompt, Laura!
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glad you braved it!
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🙂
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I love this – the striving, the acceptance. Nature is bigger than all of us, but we still need to create.
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We’ve no control on where it goes, and how is it consumed. Thank you, Sarah!
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