So what?

Posted on January 10, 2019 by Reena Saxena

lifetime’s worth
awaited recognition
wrapped in a red rose
so what if I am no more
I know I lived in your thoughts

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Hélène - Willow Poetry says:

January 10, 2019 at 6:08 pm

A beautiful tanka Reena. Read like a Renga with the two last lines being a response to the first 3 lines.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  January 10, 2019 at 8:19 pm
  
  Thanks! I thought a renga needs to be carried forward by another poet.
  
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  1. Hélène - Willow Poetry says:
    
    January 10, 2019 at 8:28 pm
    
    Traditionally it does. 🙂
    
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Indira says:

January 10, 2019 at 11:06 am

Beautiful.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  January 10, 2019 at 7:47 pm
  
  Thanks!
  
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Sue Vincent says:

January 10, 2019 at 10:24 am

Reblogged this on Sue Vincent's Daily Echo and commented:
First in this week…

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Sue Vincent says:

January 10, 2019 at 10:24 am

Love the switch of tenses in the last line, Reena.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  January 10, 2019 at 11:05 am
  
  Thanks, Sue!
  
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Sadje says:

January 10, 2019 at 7:49 am

So touching.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  January 10, 2019 at 7:49 am
  
  Thanks a lot!
  
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  1. Sadje says:
    
    January 10, 2019 at 7:52 am
    
    Welcome
    
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