Ravenously yours

shoot the messenger
or choose to believe in me
I see other worlds
sift out truth from falsehood
only my color is dark …

11 thoughts on “Ravenously yours”

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Frank J. Tassone says:

January 7, 2019 at 11:29 am

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#Haiku Happenings #6: Reena’s latest #tanka for my current #haikai challenge!

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  January 7, 2019 at 8:10 pm
  
  Thank you, Frank!
  
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  1. Frank J. Tassone says:
    
    January 8, 2019 at 11:40 am
    
    😇
    
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rothpoetry says:

January 6, 2019 at 9:08 am

A very interesting take on the prompt, Reena. Well done… I guess I tend to want to shoot them messenger!!

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  January 6, 2019 at 10:08 am
  
  Thank you, Dwight!
  
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lynn__ says:

January 6, 2019 at 7:52 am

Excellent…it almost feels like a reprisal to my raven haiku! 🙂

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  January 6, 2019 at 10:08 am
  
  Checking out yours 🙂 Thanks!
  
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pvcann says:

January 6, 2019 at 7:29 am

Wonderful

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  January 6, 2019 at 10:07 am
  
  Thank you very much!
  
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  1. pvcann says:
    
    January 6, 2019 at 10:39 am
    
    Pleasure
    
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