I cheered for truth
in hostile environs
till falsehood claimed me
I cheered for freedom
amidst dictators
till bondage chained me
I cheered for life
on the hospital bed
till death claimed me
I cheered – to
have my say, my way
-I lost myself
(44 words)

You’ve captured the essence of the push and pull of life with this piece. Well done, Reena.
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Thank you so much, Susi!
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🙂
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Keep cheering regardless.
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The only way out perhaps… Thanks a lot!
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But we must keep cheering loudly Reena, until thr cheering drives evil deaf! I like this piece…
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I like the approach 😊 Thanks a lot!
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beautiful arrangement with a profound message
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Thanks a ton!
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Well done. It is easy to throw up you hands and say what’s the use, but don’t give up hope! Change will always be in our future!
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Thanks 🙂
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Wonderful poetry. Trying to make our way in life with our best intentions.
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Thank you so much!
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Your poetry is lovely Reena! Very deep and moving. Jordy
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Thank you, Jordy!
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Seriously brilliant!
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Gratitude!
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Ohhhh. This is a thoughtful, pondering piece.
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Thanks so much!
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