expecting permanence
in a mortal existence
flames don’t last forever
why should a love not sever
ties that give a lot of pleasure
but make one feel claustrophobic?
love defies all logic
believes life is magic
we need a different air to breathe
flames don’t last forever
but make one feel claustrophobic
we need a different air to breathe

Love this Reena, you showed well how lobe has to be more than passion. There has to be something more to try for. Thanks for participating. Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. Cheers
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Thanks 🙂
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If we can find a love that offers freedom, now that’s the love I want! 🙂 Nice one, Reena!
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It is not love, if it does not let the other person be. Thanks, Susi!
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Agreed! 🙂
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I like the way you expressed that. Spread your wings and fly. Insightful poetry.
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Thanks so much!
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