Targets are not always a point

Posted on September 25, 2018 by Reena Saxena

birds spreading themselves

too thin, too high in the sky

their deceptive fluff

has managed to punch big holes

with concentrated focus

What do You See

8 thoughts on “Targets are not always a point”

V.J. Knutson says:

October 1, 2018 at 7:01 pm

I like your take on this prompt. Well done.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  October 1, 2018 at 8:21 pm
  
  Thanks so much!
  
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  1. V.J. Knutson says:
    
    October 1, 2018 at 8:27 pm
    
    You are welcome!
    
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Jordan says:

October 1, 2018 at 3:02 pm

Love it, Reena! Love that the birds made the gateway!
Jordan

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  October 1, 2018 at 8:18 pm
  
  Thanks, Jordan!
  
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Hélène Vaillant says:

September 25, 2018 at 10:46 am

What creativity Reena. Great write on this prompt. Thank you.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  September 25, 2018 at 11:17 am
  
  Thanks so much, Helene!
  
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