Original Haiku by Basho
In these drops of dew
Let me wash as a trial
The dust of this world.
Revised Haiku – as required in Chevrefeuille’s challenge
Challenged purity
dew and – unerasable
stains of unwashed dust
In these drops of dew
Let me wash as a trial
The dust of this world.
Challenged purity
dew and – unerasable
stains of unwashed dust
Nicely done, Reena!
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