Between us Posted on August 7, 2018August 9, 2018 by Reena Saxena resentment always existed between us disguised with art of diplomacy but nevertheless … Poetics Tuesday Share this: Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window) WhatsApp TweetLike Loading...
Oh wow…you nailed it. Some people live with resentment all their lives but still are “friends” — passive resistance, small little digs given with a smile…negotiating their way through times they must be together. Well done — in so few words. LikeLike Reply
Very newspeak. War is peace. Diplomacy is often the pr antecedent to the goal of conflict and control. Heaven help us. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Diplomacy or tact or doublespeak all conceal something, which can have repercussions. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Letting us finish the end of the poem in our thoughts makes a bolder statement than any words could. Enjoyed your poem very much! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Love that you also use the unspoken with your dangling ending; speaks volumes. Excellent! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
I like the way you left the ending dangling.
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Thanks!
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Oh wow…you nailed it. Some people live with resentment all their lives but still are “friends” — passive resistance, small little digs given with a smile…negotiating their way through times they must be together. Well done — in so few words.
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Thanks! Do you think it is concealed from each other?
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Very newspeak. War is peace. Diplomacy is often the pr antecedent to the goal of conflict and control. Heaven help us.
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Diplomacy or tact or doublespeak all conceal something, which can have repercussions.
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Diplomacy can disguise many feelings including resentment.
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It sure does, and also the warning of impending doom.
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Letting us finish the end of the poem in our thoughts makes a bolder statement than any words could. Enjoyed your poem very much!
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Glad you liked it. Thanks!
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Maybe diplomacy is still a good thing though…
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The world sure thinks so, and it prevents unpleasantness.
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Love that you also use the unspoken with your dangling ending; speaks volumes. Excellent!
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Thanks!
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Revelation of the unseen feeling obvious. …Very good!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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