Bussokusekika Poetry – a pattern of 5-7-5-7-7-7
grace under fire
suppression of impulses
image of control
The whirlpools that I stand in
with wobbly feet and mind
belie projected balance
Grace under fire
Bussokusekika Poetry – a pattern of 5-7-5-7-7-7
grace under fire
suppression of impulses
image of control
The whirlpools that I stand in
with wobbly feet and mind
belie projected balance
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Wonderful, so pleased you tried the Bussokusekika form it isn’t a well-known form but interesting.
All the best, hope you have a great week.
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Thanks a lot! It is just one line ahead of a tanka 🙂
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