uneven was the terrain
and the battle skewed
in favor of enemies
from onset of conflict
exhausted soldiers
with infirm captains
surprised all, with
miracles of guerilla war
there were no options
but to win or die
they chose life
the unprecedented happened.

I agree with Michael!
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Thanks for ‘agreeing’ with Michael and the central idea :). Jokes apart, thanks for reading and commenting!
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As always Reena, great depth to your writing.
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Thanks!
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Wow, this is fantastic, Reena.
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Thanks, Robbie!
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Wow Reena. That packs such a punch. I love the spin on the words and the synonyms you chose were so powerful. Conveying that battle between life and death. A hard act to follow as I am putting mine together as we speak!
Well done and thanks for joining in the Saturday Mix
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Thank you so much, Sarah!
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