The Awakening

Sleep eludes me on

balmy, moonlit nights, when

the soul is hypnotized

by greed and desire, and

the beast awakens within.

Inspired by Elsie Hagley at

Pic: renegadetribune.com

6 thoughts on “The Awakening”

micketalbot says:

August 11, 2017 at 3:40 am

Hypnotised
Mesmerised too
Those piercing eyes
Your tanka tells the
Truth

An Elfje reply have a look here:
https://simplyelfje.wordpress.com/about/ fun poetry. 🙂

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  August 11, 2017 at 5:10 pm
  
  Thanks 🙂
  
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  1. micketalbot says:
    
    August 11, 2017 at 9:30 pm
    
    My pleasure 🙂
    
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kiwinana says:

August 2, 2017 at 8:22 pm

Thanks, those eyes, staring straight at me, perfect also your tanka poem.
Happy days writing.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  August 3, 2017 at 4:10 am
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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