The body loosens its grip on struggling organs, and what we call death is but a shedding of cells. The soul, lighter than starlight, drifts beyond the familiar orbit of grief. Planets hum in their silent revolutions, each a reminder that endings are only pauses in a greater rhythm. Saturn’s rings shimmer like gateways, Jupiter’s storms swirl as if to stir new beginnings.
The spirit steps across constellations in my imagination. It is no longer bound by the weight of sorrow. Instead, it evolves into a radiant version of itself. The galaxies do not mourn; they celebrate.
Stars flare in welcome, their brilliance a chorus of renewal. To dissolve into the cosmos is not to vanish, but to become—expanded, luminous, free.
Somewhere there exists
a brighter self among stars
planets sing rebirth

What a beautiful Haibun, Reena. Loved it.
‘Somewhere there exists
a brighter self among stars
planets sing rebirth‘
Excellent.
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❤ ❤ ❤ Reena, I love your poem. Please put this one in your “keeper” folder.
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Thanks so much!
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You’re very welcome.
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Beautiful Haibun
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome
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This is beautifully written, Reena.
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Thank you so much, Eugi!
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You’re welcome, Reena.
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This reminds we are made of stardust.
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Good reminder!
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I love the parallel between the stars and our own life
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We are part of the same universe.
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A beautiful way of seeing the end of life, and a wonderful Haibun to go with it.
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Thank you, Diana! We need this reassurance at times.
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🙂
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Very nice!
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Beautiful 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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