Are you God? And why are you
a formless voice?
Look at the parachute; the sky hums
It is fluffy, it is grey, it feels like a cloud
But it will take you to places unknown
So, shall I abandon the skywalk and jump
unsupported into un-space unknown?
Aren’t you abandoned, Sunita? You are homeless
planet-less, and nothing pulls you down. Don’t wait
for your bones to give away, they need structures
to recognise you as their own
Here I come,
whoever-you-are,
but let me explore
then let them know
if they still care
-I’m a stranger
to all those worlds
unknown
but I’m sure to hear
unearthly welcome songs
a different kind of music
to make my boat float
without the oceans
without the air
and without gravity
that holds a planet
in captivity

that was a really interesting and captivating poem Reena! Really deep and I loved it!
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Thank you so much, Carol!
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I read it many times. It’s so touching.
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You made my day.
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Thinking of Sunita W. Moving. This is an interesting form of writing. You express so well, Reena.
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She was on my mind. In the Indian context, can we say she was predestined to travel to different worlds, but remain stuck like Trishanku.
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❤️❤️❤️
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Reminds me of that song…”ground control to Major Tom your circuit’s dead there’s something wrong…can you hear me Major Tom…can you here…am I sitting in a tin can….” a troubling concept……
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Yes, the lines are troubling. Thank you, Ain!
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Love the sense of being afloat (maybe left) in space…
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Being afloat is good. Being left ?? Thanks, Bjorn!
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An astronaut arguing with God, and ready to take the plunge into the unknown! Certainly this is far out of the bounds of what is known scientifically, and what is expected. (Love your new header btw.)
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Thank you, Dora! I guess astronauts get the closest to God as they experience the creations.
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I love that you weave your words into a visual piece of writing.
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome.
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