Astronaut

Are you God? And why are you
a formless voice?

So, shall I abandon the skywalk and jump
unsupported into un-space unknown?

Here I come,
whoever-you-are,
but let me explore
then let them know
if they still care
-I’m a stranger
to all those worlds
unknown
but I’m sure to hear
unearthly welcome songs
a different kind of music
to make my boat float
without the oceans
without the air
and without gravity
that holds a planet
in captivity


Poetics: Reimagining the Familiar

16 thoughts on “Astronaut

  1. Reminds me of that song…”ground control to Major Tom your circuit’s dead there’s something wrong…can you hear me Major Tom…can you here…am I sitting in a tin can….” a troubling concept……

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  2. An astronaut arguing with God, and ready to take the plunge into the unknown! Certainly this is far out of the bounds of what is known scientifically, and what is expected. (Love your new header btw.)

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