undermining expressions
subconscious reverberations
drive apathy; spur detachment
past, present bound by parchment
Suppressed
undermining expressions
subconscious reverberations
drive apathy; spur detachment
past, present bound by parchment
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wnderful Reena! 😀 I love it ❤
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Thank you so much!
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Reena, this feels concise yet powerfully evocative. To me, the interplay of suppression and connection is strikingly well-crafted.
Much love,
David
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Thank you so much!
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*hug*
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much!
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The parchment line made me think of how fragile our lives can feel.
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Those sudden changes make us feel fragile. Thank you, Christine!
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past, present bound by parchment
I found this line especially effective when I employ the definition of parchment that says, a thin layers of animal skin, dried and used as a writing surface.
Brilliant line.
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Other than the qualities of parchment, it also rhymed with the other line 🙂
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Clever….
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Lovely poem
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Thanks!
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Most welcome
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Love the descriptive language.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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