a sunk ship
bodies netted out
-silent
-as much as
we are traumatised
by tsunamis
or failed voyages
I wish they could speak.
tell us about
the splendour or horror
of deep worlds
distrusted
for unfamiliarity
the smug sailor
who conquers waves
weeps in silence
or is intrigued
by unfamiliar objects
or living beings
creeping up
to disturb life
I ask submarines
to not just dive
but develop a language
to help us understand
each other
-those feared depths
and our shallowness

A great metaphorical cry to understand our own natures better for goodness knows we are in need of it, Reena…
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Thank you so much, Frewin!
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that last stanza is so powerful
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Thank you so much!
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Powerful write, Reena! 🩷🩷
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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Vivid in its imagery, a sunk ship and bodies netted out, I too thought of refugees and that last stanza is so powerful. If we could only hope to understand each other. Great writing.
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Thanks a ton!
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The last stanza made me think of Captain Nemo and Nautilus.
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Captain Nemo is described as a mad genius in some writeups. BTW, Atlantis is also the name used by Ayn Rand for an underground idyllic township, but it is terrestrial not underwater.
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“I ask submarines
to not just dive
but develop a language
to help us understand
each other
-those feared depths
and our shallowness”
Very profound, Ma’am. Wow! 🙂
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Thanks a ton, Aishwarya! Means a lot coming from you.
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A powerful poem, Reena, that made me think of migrant boats. I like the alliterative phrase ‘traumatised by tsunamis’, and the lines:
‘I ask submarines
to not just dive
but develop a language
to help us understand
each other’.
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Thank you for the detailed response, Kim!
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You’re most welcome, Reena!
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That last stanza is incredibly powerful for me! I enjoyed this very much….
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Glad to know that. Thank you so much!
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powerfully evoked, Reena❣️
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Glad you think so 🤗
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🤗🤗🤗
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So good.
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Thanks again!
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My pleasure
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